`Chapter Four
*Our first meeting*
Big red eyes staring at me , the stench of blood , hands as strong as steel , an eerie smile. Before i knew it i passed out , when i woke up , I was laying down on Mimi's lap , her hands stroking my head , tears falling , I said " Mimi why are you crying? Where is that "thing" we saw just now ?"
Mimi cried some more then finally said " She died , she was hurt on her way here , knowing it was her last moment , she wanted someone to deliver her letter , at that moment we were passing by , with her hopes held high she ran to us , not knowing that was the last strength she ever had , but before she went she said that she was ever so sorry to scare you, good luck on getting out , don't fall for those traps and please pass this letter to my brother Yuki , he is traveling with a group of friends just ahead of us, tell him this is Rosie's last will. Thank you my dear friends and farewell."
Mimi couldn't stop crying , this reminded her of our mother , Mimi was the last one mama talked with well of course she must have said something to her before she went , If I'm not wrong it went something like this , " Sorry Mimi i couldn't stay with you ,please forgive me and your father, Mimi please take care of Kimi , live on and take care and farewell always remember papa and mama loves you".Soon we just kept walking forward we just kept walking and walking , then finally after few hours of traveling we heard noises of people chatting and there was a glow of light , they must have had fire torches or something. Mimi shouted HELLO , then soon the light was headed this way ,they looked like grown men around their twenties or so , one of them said "Excuse me have you seen a girl , with long golden hair , wearing a pinkish white dress?"
Mimi replied,"You mean Rosie?"
They nodded.
Mimi eyes filled with tears, said "sorry, here are her last words to Yuki"
Yuki walked up and took the letter , Yuki looked around his twenties like the rest but more handsome , more younger. Yuki turned and ask , "How did she look like before she went? when she went did she have a smile on her face?"
"she's been hurt real badly , but she left with a smile , i buried her body before moving on , is that okay? " said Mimi ,tears falling from her bright blue eyes.
He smiled and thanked her . The other members of the group asked whether we would want to travel with them and of course we said YES! These people , when i'm with them there's this feeling, a very uneasy feeling.
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be sure to wait for
`Chapter Five
* Their past lives * YA-HA!.
be sure to tell me how u feel about this story and i really need remarks umm like does it need improvements or wad. hehe just let me know wad u think thanls =) the more u comment the more i'm willing to write.
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Monday, October 22, 2007
Thursday, October 18, 2007
The terrified girl -chapter three
`Chapter three
* This place*
When we first stepped in , chills ran down my spine for some reason I'm scared , i hold on to Mimi's hand real tightly I'm sure she's feeling the same way i do , even if her face doesn't show it but her hands are getting real sweaty . We sisters just don't open ourselves up , it worries us sometimes seeing each other hurt but there was nothing you could about it knowing that she's trying to hard to keep it in . The old man said "Keep walking and don't turn back , you will meet people on the way and travel with them , once you get out , you will be free , with friends and this adventure will forever be engraved in your soul. Well if you get out that is." Ending his sentence with a eerie laugh really worries me. After taking a few steps forward we heard the door slam shut behind us , this place has no lights lit up , no sound just plain stillness , Mimi and me looked at each other and said " Well now that we are in here lets just keep going " and she gave a big warm smile , she grabbed my hand and walk forward . This place is like really dark , we can't really see where we are going or whats in our way , but the thing is that we were walking straight yet we aren't bumping in to thing so i decided to walk to the side to see if there was any thing there , when i did i hit my shoulder on to something , it was cold and very very flat , so with my hands on it i walked forward to see how far it reaches , then i noticed its a wall! From my opinion this place is like a highway a very long highway with walls beside it and a celling so its much more like a tunnel or something like that ,I don't think there were any windows , well even if there were its just too dark to see it. we keep walking forward well it felt as if we've walked for an hour or more but still no one insight nor is there any sign that we are anywhere near the exit. Soon , Mimi heard someone's footsteps getting closer and closer , faster and faster ,we had no courage to turn back and look so we walk faster soon our brisk walk turned into a jog then a run , the footsteps is really near us then i felt someone breathe on my neck I let our a scream tears filled my eyes they were not tears of sadness nor were they tears of happiness more like tears of fear real fear , my heart beating fast , faster ,and faster my breathing got more heavier and heavier , my hair was standing , its giving me goosebumps , finally i took the courage to look back .
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* This place*
When we first stepped in , chills ran down my spine for some reason I'm scared , i hold on to Mimi's hand real tightly I'm sure she's feeling the same way i do , even if her face doesn't show it but her hands are getting real sweaty . We sisters just don't open ourselves up , it worries us sometimes seeing each other hurt but there was nothing you could about it knowing that she's trying to hard to keep it in . The old man said "Keep walking and don't turn back , you will meet people on the way and travel with them , once you get out , you will be free , with friends and this adventure will forever be engraved in your soul. Well if you get out that is." Ending his sentence with a eerie laugh really worries me. After taking a few steps forward we heard the door slam shut behind us , this place has no lights lit up , no sound just plain stillness , Mimi and me looked at each other and said " Well now that we are in here lets just keep going " and she gave a big warm smile , she grabbed my hand and walk forward . This place is like really dark , we can't really see where we are going or whats in our way , but the thing is that we were walking straight yet we aren't bumping in to thing so i decided to walk to the side to see if there was any thing there , when i did i hit my shoulder on to something , it was cold and very very flat , so with my hands on it i walked forward to see how far it reaches , then i noticed its a wall! From my opinion this place is like a highway a very long highway with walls beside it and a celling so its much more like a tunnel or something like that ,I don't think there were any windows , well even if there were its just too dark to see it. we keep walking forward well it felt as if we've walked for an hour or more but still no one insight nor is there any sign that we are anywhere near the exit. Soon , Mimi heard someone's footsteps getting closer and closer , faster and faster ,we had no courage to turn back and look so we walk faster soon our brisk walk turned into a jog then a run , the footsteps is really near us then i felt someone breathe on my neck I let our a scream tears filled my eyes they were not tears of sadness nor were they tears of happiness more like tears of fear real fear , my heart beating fast , faster ,and faster my breathing got more heavier and heavier , my hair was standing , its giving me goosebumps , finally i took the courage to look back .
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Tuesday, October 16, 2007
The terrified girl- chapter one and two
`Chapter one
* Kimi *
There was a girl her name was Kimi, she's only fourteen when she died. Well for someone who was trapped with her in that place knew her well enough to tell you this story, let me tell you a tale , a tale about this girl named Kimi.
Kimi is a girl who had a twin sister Mimi, they both grew up in an orphanage well at the age of five their parents were brutally murdered living her sister and her alive , the murderer was never caught . Kimi and Mimi were both happy and cheery on the outside yet on the inside the were both lost, sad and scared , no matter how close they were they never opened up to each other. At the age of eleven the orphanage turned into some science laboratory where they do tests on real humans instead of mice. Most of them died yet those scientists just laugh it off calling them failures they were more like sadists then scientists , they would always make sure that we would watch them do these experiments on our friends. Its sad we can't get transferred out because there was no where else we could go to. Even our care takers went nuts , when the head nun got married to this sadistic guy who loves to see people suffer or bleed. In the beginning when we first met him , he seemed like a very well groomed gentlemen but his reaction changed when my friend got an asthma attack. He would not help or care he would just watch and smile , there was evilness in his smile. Three months later and they got married . Mimi started having weird nightmares or starts throwing up uncontrollably , but what pains me most is that she would just smile and say I'm alright don't worry it'll last only for awhile. Mimi is actually younger than me but she is much more mature than me.
she is always standing up for me and protecting me from those bullies and stuff she has the most burden from the rest cause the nuns always thinks shes the one causing the ruckus when she was just protecting me . Well this always happens because the other kids would run crying saying she started it , well u know kids.
`Chapter two
* The trap*
Soon after Mimi started losing weight tremendously , her body getting weaker and each day getting paler yet it was that smile that kept those scientist thinking she's a "pass" and wanted to go extreme so they did more experiments on her then the others , well Kimi has gotten her share the same as Mimi but Mimi died earlier. But before she did , when they were twelve about nine to ten months later they manage to escape from that hell only to go into another. They both ran and ran until that place was out of sight , its night so its dark and cold , both were starving from hunger tired and thirsty . they ran deep into the woods where no one else lived , they walked and walked for hours until they could see the sun rise they walked deeper in deeper and deeper only to find that its getting darker and darker even if its twelve noon now its much more darker than it looks , there was so much trees covering the sun . They just kept walking till they reach a village , they looked at each other smiling with joy but that happiness didn't last long, when they stepped into that place its more like a ghost town, no one was there , all doors and windows shut tight , some opened yet one one was there , well everything there looks rundown so its no surprise for this to happen in the middle of nowhere. They still didn't give up hope , they walk deeper and deeper till they found this old man there . The old man looked around his fifties or sixties , he was really surprised to see us , Mimi and me looked liked more like a vampire then human , he invited us over to his place. His place is covered with dust and hunting materials , like guns , chains , knifes and stuff. He asked us suddenly closing the door
" Do you want to get out? or do u want to make more friends? or do u want both and even go on an adventure with them? "
" If its possible i really would want to make friends and get out of this place and even go on an adventure with them and live with them for the rest of my life." replied Mimi
" Well i can grant you that wish , just go through the back door but there's no turning back. Are you really sure u want that? "
I was really surprised when he said that , its as if he would slave us or torture us well more like kick us out ,cause he said go out the back door .
" Yes I'm sure but are you sure its safe? " I replied
"Well it depends you know" laughed the old man
We both nodded and went in the back door .
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* Kimi *
There was a girl her name was Kimi, she's only fourteen when she died. Well for someone who was trapped with her in that place knew her well enough to tell you this story, let me tell you a tale , a tale about this girl named Kimi.
Kimi is a girl who had a twin sister Mimi, they both grew up in an orphanage well at the age of five their parents were brutally murdered living her sister and her alive , the murderer was never caught . Kimi and Mimi were both happy and cheery on the outside yet on the inside the were both lost, sad and scared , no matter how close they were they never opened up to each other. At the age of eleven the orphanage turned into some science laboratory where they do tests on real humans instead of mice. Most of them died yet those scientists just laugh it off calling them failures they were more like sadists then scientists , they would always make sure that we would watch them do these experiments on our friends. Its sad we can't get transferred out because there was no where else we could go to. Even our care takers went nuts , when the head nun got married to this sadistic guy who loves to see people suffer or bleed. In the beginning when we first met him , he seemed like a very well groomed gentlemen but his reaction changed when my friend got an asthma attack. He would not help or care he would just watch and smile , there was evilness in his smile. Three months later and they got married . Mimi started having weird nightmares or starts throwing up uncontrollably , but what pains me most is that she would just smile and say I'm alright don't worry it'll last only for awhile. Mimi is actually younger than me but she is much more mature than me.
she is always standing up for me and protecting me from those bullies and stuff she has the most burden from the rest cause the nuns always thinks shes the one causing the ruckus when she was just protecting me . Well this always happens because the other kids would run crying saying she started it , well u know kids.
`Chapter two
* The trap*
Soon after Mimi started losing weight tremendously , her body getting weaker and each day getting paler yet it was that smile that kept those scientist thinking she's a "pass" and wanted to go extreme so they did more experiments on her then the others , well Kimi has gotten her share the same as Mimi but Mimi died earlier. But before she did , when they were twelve about nine to ten months later they manage to escape from that hell only to go into another. They both ran and ran until that place was out of sight , its night so its dark and cold , both were starving from hunger tired and thirsty . they ran deep into the woods where no one else lived , they walked and walked for hours until they could see the sun rise they walked deeper in deeper and deeper only to find that its getting darker and darker even if its twelve noon now its much more darker than it looks , there was so much trees covering the sun . They just kept walking till they reach a village , they looked at each other smiling with joy but that happiness didn't last long, when they stepped into that place its more like a ghost town, no one was there , all doors and windows shut tight , some opened yet one one was there , well everything there looks rundown so its no surprise for this to happen in the middle of nowhere. They still didn't give up hope , they walk deeper and deeper till they found this old man there . The old man looked around his fifties or sixties , he was really surprised to see us , Mimi and me looked liked more like a vampire then human , he invited us over to his place. His place is covered with dust and hunting materials , like guns , chains , knifes and stuff. He asked us suddenly closing the door
" Do you want to get out? or do u want to make more friends? or do u want both and even go on an adventure with them? "
" If its possible i really would want to make friends and get out of this place and even go on an adventure with them and live with them for the rest of my life." replied Mimi
" Well i can grant you that wish , just go through the back door but there's no turning back. Are you really sure u want that? "
I was really surprised when he said that , its as if he would slave us or torture us well more like kick us out ,cause he said go out the back door .
" Yes I'm sure but are you sure its safe? " I replied
"Well it depends you know" laughed the old man
We both nodded and went in the back door .
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