Thursday, October 18, 2007

The terrified girl -chapter three

`Chapter three
* This place*
When we first stepped in , chills ran down my spine for some reason I'm scared , i hold on to Mimi's hand real tightly I'm sure she's feeling the same way i do , even if her face doesn't show it but her hands are getting real sweaty . We sisters just don't open ourselves up , it worries us sometimes seeing each other hurt but there was nothing you could about it knowing that she's trying to hard to keep it in . The old man said "Keep walking and don't turn back , you will meet people on the way and travel with them , once you get out , you will be free , with friends and this adventure will forever be engraved in your soul. Well if you get out that is." Ending his sentence with a eerie laugh really worries me. After taking a few steps forward we heard the door slam shut behind us , this place has no lights lit up , no sound just plain stillness , Mimi and me looked at each other and said " Well now that we are in here lets just keep going " and she gave a big warm smile , she grabbed my hand and walk forward . This place is like really dark , we can't really see where we are going or whats in our way , but the thing is that we were walking straight yet we aren't bumping in to thing so i decided to walk to the side to see if there was any thing there , when i did i hit my shoulder on to something , it was cold and very very flat , so with my hands on it i walked forward to see how far it reaches , then i noticed its a wall! From my opinion this place is like a highway a very long highway with walls beside it and a celling so its much more like a tunnel or something like that ,I don't think there were any windows , well even if there were its just too dark to see it. we keep walking forward well it felt as if we've walked for an hour or more but still no one insight nor is there any sign that we are anywhere near the exit. Soon , Mimi heard someone's footsteps getting closer and closer , faster and faster ,we had no courage to turn back and look so we walk faster soon our brisk walk turned into a jog then a run , the footsteps is really near us then i felt someone breathe on my neck I let our a scream tears filled my eyes they were not tears of sadness nor were they tears of happiness more like tears of fear real fear , my heart beating fast , faster ,and faster my breathing got more heavier and heavier , my hair was standing , its giving me goosebumps , finally i took the courage to look back .
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