Monday, October 22, 2007

The terrified girl- chapter Four

`Chapter Four
*Our first meeting*

Big red eyes staring at me , the stench of blood , hands as strong as steel , an eerie smile. Before i knew it i passed out , when i woke up , I was laying down on Mimi's lap , her hands stroking my head , tears falling , I said " Mimi why are you crying? Where is that "thing" we saw just now ?"
Mimi cried some more then finally said " She died , she was hurt on her way here , knowing it was her last moment , she wanted someone to deliver her letter , at that moment we were passing by , with her hopes held high she ran to us , not knowing that was the last strength she ever had , but before she went she said that she was ever so sorry to scare you, good luck on getting out , don't fall for those traps and please pass this letter to my brother Yuki , he is traveling with a group of friends just ahead of us, tell him this is Rosie's last will. Thank you my dear friends and farewell."
Mimi couldn't stop crying , this reminded her of our mother , Mimi was the last one mama talked with well of course she must have said something to her before she went , If I'm not wrong it went something like this , " Sorry Mimi i couldn't stay with you ,please forgive me and your father, Mimi please take care of Kimi , live on and take care and farewell always remember papa and mama loves you".Soon we just kept walking forward we just kept walking and walking , then finally after few hours of traveling we heard noises of people chatting and there was a glow of light , they must have had fire torches or something. Mimi shouted HELLO , then soon the light was headed this way ,they looked like grown men around their twenties or so , one of them said "Excuse me have you seen a girl , with long golden hair , wearing a pinkish white dress?"
Mimi replied,"You mean Rosie?"
They nodded.
Mimi eyes filled with tears, said "sorry, here are her last words to Yuki"
Yuki walked up and took the letter , Yuki looked around his twenties like the rest but more handsome , more younger. Yuki turned and ask , "How did she look like before she went? when she went did she have a smile on her face?"
"she's been hurt real badly , but she left with a smile , i buried her body before moving on , is that okay? " said Mimi ,tears falling from her bright blue eyes.
He smiled and thanked her . The other members of the group asked whether we would want to travel with them and of course we said YES! These people , when i'm with them there's this feeling, a very uneasy feeling.
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be sure to wait for
`Chapter Five
* Their past lives * YA-HA!.
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